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        10     EXT. OPEN AIR STAGE - DAY                               10

               Syren is suddenly dressed very differently - flowers in her
               hair, the ball gown replaced by a loose-fitting tie-dye dress
               and the makeup stripped right down.

               She's standing on a small stage set up in the middle of a
               field - a low-key open-air festival - playing to a small
               crowd of HIPPIES, all nodding to the beat.

               A small backing group strum out a mournful melody as Syren
               begins to croon:

                                   SYREN
                             (sings)
                         I can't believe you've left me,
                         Don't know that you've upset me,
                         You just want to forget me, 
                         Why don't you come and get me...

               The music rises again as she hits the chorus:

                                   SYREN (cont'd)
                             (sings)
                         Where are you, baby, we used to
                         have so much fun, 
                         You drive me crazy, somebody tell
                         me where he's gone,
                         Where are you, baby, we used to
                         have so much fun,
                         You drive me crazy...

               She steps away from the mic stand, letting the band continue
               to play as the crowd throw some APPLAUSE her way, but Syren's
               attention is drawn elsewhere.

               She tilts her head and turns to look out over the fields, the
               setting sun highlighting a lone FIGURE standing on a hilltop
               overlooking the stage.

               Syren seems to be able to sense that someone's there, quietly
               slipping off the stage as the band play on.

        11     EXT. FIELDS - NEXT                                      11

               Walking out across the grounds, pushing through waist-high
               grass, she heads straight for the hillside where the figure
               is still waiting.

               She leaves the patch of tall grass, her bare feet crunching
               across the ground as she starts to climb the hill, her pale
               eyes fixed on the mystery person.

               Silhouetted by the sun, the person's features can't be seen,
               but their shoulder-length hair blows gently in the breeze.

                                   SYREN
                         Who's there? Who's watching me?

               Silence. Syren slowly comes to a stop.

                                   SYREN (cont'd)
                         Chris? Chris, is that you?

               No answer - and then there's a sudden RUMBLE of thunder from
               overhead, and in an instant the fields are pelted with RAIN.

               Syren shivers as thick rain falls all around her, hugging
               herself with her arms as she looks up to the stormy sky.

               We follow her gaze up into the suddenly grey and stormy
               skies, before we pan back down and into:

        12     EXT. VICTORIAN LONDON - NIGHT                           12

               Sherlock Norton and Miss Naomi Vyra hurry along a cobbled
               city street, passing a horse and carriage as they seek
               shelter underneath a small bridge.

                                   DANYAEL
                         The weather in our fair nation's
                         capital never fails to amaze me.

                                   NAOMI
                         It never fails to make me rather
                         miserable, Mr. Norton.

                                   DANYAEL
                             (grins)
                         It's all in one's perception, Miss
                         Vyra. For a city as densely
                         populated and heavily polluted as
                         London, the very fact that nature
                         makes it presence felt at all is a
                         source of constant wonder to me.

               Naomi shivers and draws her jacket tighter, clearly not
               sharing in Danyael's sense of awe.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         My colleague Syren should be here
                         any moment, and then we can
                         continue to our destination.

                                   SYREN (O.S.)
                         Sorry I'm late...

               They look up as Syren hurries to shelter with them under the
               bridge - she's sporting a bowler hat and a heavy raincoat.

                                   SYREN (cont'd)
                         Got caught in the rain myself,
                         Norton. Had to take a detour all
                         round the blessed wrekin to get
                         here.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Never mind, never mind. Doctor W.
                         Syren, allow me to introduce our
                         newest client, Miss Naomi Vyra.

               The girls shake hands, Naomi noticing Syren's blindness.

                                   NAOMI
                         Oh! Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't realise
                         you were-

                                   SYREN
                         Blind? Yes, well - you can blame my
                         time in the Army for that one.
                         Malfunctioning mortar shell.

                                   NAOMI
                         Were you a soldier?

                                   SYREN
                         Medic. I've turned my hand to
                         forensics and science since then,
                         thanks to my companionship with
                         Norton here.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Yes, yes, we can get to all that
                         later. Come, Syren! The game is
                         afoot.

               Danyael leads the way, the two girls following as they round
               a corner, disappearing down another alley before a loud CRACK
               of thunder pushes us to:

        13     EXT. FORT - NIGHT                                       13

               And that same crack of thunder becomes the BOOM of a terrific
               explosion, knocking Diego off his feet and sending him
               rolling down one of the ramps leading from the walls.

               SHOUTS and GUNFIRE rattle out from all around, and as the
               wincing Diego picks himself up, he looks around to see the
               fortress is in chaos:

               The walls have been breached, huge HOLES blasted through
               them, and waves of MEXICAN SOLDIERS are pouring through those
               breaches, launching into vicious hand-to-hand combat with the
               massively outnumbered defenders.

               Scrambling to recover his sword, he regains his balance just
               as a Mexican soldier CHARGES him bayonet-first, Diego turning
               and SKEWERING the soldier.

               Pushing the man off his blade, Diego turns and is faced by
               two more, but his lightning-fast moves cut down both invaders
               in moments.

               Diego looks around - his beleaguered troops are losing and
               losing fast, getting cut down where they stand, but a cry for
               help spins him round to see:

               Twist, battling with no less than four soldiers, holding them
               off by swinging her rifle at them like a baseball bat.

                                   DIEGO
                         McFadden!

               He starts to rush over to her, finding his way blocked at
               every turn by fallen soldiers, live ones out for his blood
               and DEBRIS hurled his way by more EXPLOSIONS.

               Twist is getting pushed back with each swing, visibly growing
               tired - she doesn't have long unless somebody saves her!

                                   DIEGO (cont'd)
                         McFadden, hold on!

               She looks up and sees him, but he's still too far away to
               help, and as she desperately tries to hold off the attackers
               with another clumsy swing, she doesn't see a fifth charge in
               from behind...

                                   DIEGO (cont'd)
                         Look out!!

               She spins round, seeing the inbound soldier at last as we
               SMASH CUT to:

        14     EXT. PIRATE SHIP - DAY                                  14

               And the same expression of horror is etched on Twist's face
               as the sound of booming CANNON FIRE rings out.

               She DUCKS as something SMASHES into the ship above her head,
               showering her with splinters, before she tumbles down the
               steps and onto the main deck.

               The huge, looming shape of a NAVY MAN O'WAR fills the sky,
               bearing down on the galleon and currently blasting the holy
               hell out of it with concentrated cannon fire.

               All over the deck, the pirates are engaged in a fierce
               struggle with invading NAVY SOLDIERS, the better-equipped
               swordsmen of the Navy more than a match for the pirates.

                                   TWIST
                         Stand fast! Repel all boarders! Mr.
                         Wylde! Cut those mooring lines and
                         get us away from that thing!

                                   CREWMAN
                         Aye, cap'n!

               More soldiers SWING across onto the galleon's deck, and as
               another CANNONBALL blows a hole right through the mast,
               sending it TUMBLING to CRASH across the midsection of the
               ship, Twist finally spots Diego.

                                   TWIST
                         Don't just stand there, get to it!

               Diego turns to meet her gaze - and then takes a step back!

                                   TWIST (cont'd)
                         What the-

               Several SOLDIERS suddenly swarm past him, forcing Twist to
               draw her cutlass and defend herself, and she realises which
               side First Mate Diego is on at last.

                                   TWIST (cont'd)
                             (snarling)
                         You... you wretched traitor!

               With a CRY of anger she THROWS her attackers to the ground,
               marching her way towards Diego and SLICING through anybody
               foolish enough to get in her way.

               Diego stays where he is, coolly regarding her as she cuts
               down soldier after soldier to reach him.

                                   TWIST (cont'd)
                         I'll make a throw rug out of your
                         hide, you good for nothing-

               Diego smoothly steps to the side - and reveals a GAP in the
               galleon's railings!

               Twist has too much momentum to stop, pitching headfirst over
               the side of the ship with a YELL!

               Diego turns and looks over the edge of the deck - and there's
               Twist, hanging for dear life onto a PLANK, with SHARKS
               circling in the water below!

               She boggles at the fate waiting for her in the sea below -
               just as one of her CREW sails past her with a SHRIEK,
               splashing to a watery grave.

               She looks up - and Diego has gone. Twist tries to pull
               herself up onto the deck again, but the plank she's clinging
               to CRACKS, starting to BEND and break in two!

                                   TWIST (cont'd)
                         Oh, come on!

               Looking around for any way out of this, Twist finds herself
               looking straight into a cabin of the man o'war:

               And sitting on a chair within the luxurious quarters is
               JULIE, dressed in full fifteenth century finery.

                                   TWIST (cont'd)
                             (frowns)
                         Julie? What's...
                             (penny drops)
                         Wait a minute...

               Julie turns and sees Twist, and a beat of recognition flashes
               between them before we MATCH CUT to:

        15     INT. DARK ROOM - NIGHT                                  15

               Julie sits before us, now in a long, flowing white dress that
               spills onto the floor from the wizened old chair in which she
               sits. 

               Her hair is also long, as though she's left it to grow for
               several years, and the fine layer of DUST and COBWEBS over
               everything suggests she hasn't moved from this spot for a
               very, very long time.

               The room around her appears to be a master bedroom of sorts,
               although it's shrouded in inky darkness, the only features
               being a window covered by pale curtains, billowing in some
               breeze, and several sturdy DOORS.

               As Julie slowly tilts her head toward each door, different
               SOUNDS can be heard from the other side, muffled and
               indistinct:

               The CLOP-CLOP of horses and calls of Victorian London; the
               jazzy show tunes of the musical; the mayhem and shouts of the
               pirate ship; more battle sounds from the fortress; and the
               sounds from the festival.

               Something stirs in the air overhead, and Julie manages to
               lift her head a fraction, looking up to see:

               The BLUE HAZE OF LIGHT is back, this time almost resembling a
               VULTURE as it circles her, accompanied by WHISPERING VOICES
               in dozens of languages.

               Julie closes her eyes, a TEAR rolling down her cheek as she
               lowers her head again, and as the breeze flowing through the
               room picks up, there's a SWOOSH of sound as we cut to:

        16     EXT. FIELDS - DAY                                       16

               Syren is running through the fields as the storm rages all
               around her - flashes of LIGHTNING and ominous RUMBLES of
               thunder don't seem to be slowing her down.

                                   SYREN
                         Chris? Chris! Where are you?

               She yells into the tumultuous weather around her but nobody's
               there to reply - her mystery man is nowhere in sight.

               Gathering up her dress so she can run more easily, Syren
               hustles onward, mud SQUELCHING between her toes as the
               rainfall turns the green fields to brown mush.

               She reaches the base of a hill and starts to climb it,
               slipping and scrambling for grip all the way as she
               struggles, breathless with exertion.

               She finally makes it to the summit - and the rain stops. In
               an instant, brilliant SUNLIGHT streams down all around,
               leaving a sodden Syren standing at the crest of the hill.

               Before her is a vibrant field of FLOWERS stretching out for
               miles, a dazzling array of colours shimmering in the breeze.

               Syren closes her eyes and inhales deeply, the wash of scents
               refreshing her as she catches her breath. Pausing to try and
               wring dry her dress and hair she starts down the hill.

               Standing in the middle of the waist-high flowers is the
               mystery man, and Syren starts to wade through the field.

               He stands with his back to her, facing the sunlight and once
               again silhouetted.

                                   SYREN (cont'd)
                         Chris...

               She manages to get right up to the figure, reaching out a
               cautious hand to lay on their shoulder, and the man starts to
               turn round...

               ... but it's Danyael. Shirt open, biceps a-rippling in true
               Mills & Boon style, his long hair draped round his shoulders
               and looking every inch like the archetypal romantic hero.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Syren... I'm so glad you could make
                         it at last.

               Before she can react to the sound of Danyael's voice,he
               quickly embraces her, pulls her close and KISSES her, and as
               he leans her backwards a little you'd swear you could hear a
               chorus of angels singing in the background.

               Syren suddenly breaks the kiss, pushing away from Danyael and
               regaining her balance.

                                   SYREN
                         No! No, this...

                                   DANYAEL
                         What's wrong? Isn't this what you
                         want?

                                   SYREN
                         I... I mean, I do, but... this
                         isn't...
                             (closes eyes; deep breath)
                         You're not who I want.

               Danyael straightens, his pride dented, but as Syren slowly
               opens her eyes she starts to frown, realising something.

                                   SYREN (cont'd)
                         None of this is...

               As she looks around, the bright colours suddenly seeming two
               dimensional and artificial, we cut back to:

        17     INT. TOWN HOUSE - NIGHT                                 17

               The front door is thrown open to reveal Sherlock Norton, with
               Dr. Syren and Miss Vyra close behind. Norton stands in the
               doorway for a beat, eyes scanning the hallway.

                                   NAOMI
                         Er, Mister Norton? This is my
                         house. I heard the noises from next
                         door.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Yes... yes, you did.

               A beat. Naomi looks to Syren, confused, but Syren just shakes
               her head - let him do his thing.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         Come, Syren!

               He dramatically closes the door again, and we cut to:

        18     INT. NEXT TOWN HOUSE - NEXT                             18

               And as the door swings open again, it's the same trio. We're
               in a different home this time, Norton surreptitiously tucking
               a set of lock picks into his coat pocket.

                                   SYREN
                         I think it's safe to assume that no
                         one is home, then, Norton.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Alright, then. Here is where the
                         investigation begins.

               He steps gingerly over the threshold, being sure not to
               disturb anything, and is followed by Syren and Naomi.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         Exactly where in the household did
                         you hear the disturbance, Miss
                         Vyra?

                                   NAOMI
                         Upstairs, I think. Opposite my
                         master bedroom.

               Danyael looks towards the staircase, and with a nod of his
               head to the others starts to make his way up, into:

        19     INT. TOWN HOUSE - BEDROOM - NEXT                        19

               Carefully nudging the door open, Norton has his oversized
               magnifying glass in hand as he examines the door handle.

                                   NAOMI
                             (whispers; to Syren)
                         What is he doing?

                                   SYREN
                         I imagine he's checking for
                         fingerprints, given that we haven't
                         entered the room yet.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Nothing. Whoever lives here is
                         either studiously clean or a very
                         competent criminal.

               He pushes the door wide open - and a BODY lies face down on
               the floor in the middle of the room, surrounded by a pool of
               BLOOD.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         Ah! We arrive at our grisly
                         conclusion at last. Syren, be a
                         gentleman and contact Lestrade at
                         the station, would you? I think
                         I'll be safe to gather any evidence
                         I need in the time it takes him to
                         arrive.

               Syren nods, making her exit as Danyael steps into the bedroom
               with wide, broad strides.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         Come in, Miss Vyra. There is
                         nothing to fear from a dead man.

               Naomi doesn't look so confident, but steps bravely inside as
               Norton crouches by the body. It's a tall, lean man with long
               black hair.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         Did you ever have much contact with
                         your neighbours, Miss Vyra?

                                   NAOMI
                         None, sir. I'm still quite new to
                         this part of town, I only moved
                         here a few weeks ago. I only ever
                         heard these two fighting.

               Danyael rises, turning his lens on everything in the room -
               the bedclothes, the walls, the dressing table - before coming
               to a stop on a row of picture frames, all of which are empty.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Hmm. Curious.

                                   NAOMI
                         What is?

                                   DANYAEL
                         Why would anyone seek to hang empty
                         picture frames on their wall, would
                         you say?

                                   NAOMI
                         Perhaps they were just seeing where
                         they should go?

               Danyael studies the frames carefully.

                                   DANYAEL
                         No, these have been tampered with.
                         Somebody has removed the contents.

                                   NAOMI
                         But why would anyone do that?

                                   DANYAEL
                         I think we can deduce that this was
                         a crime of passion, Miss Vyra, and
                         that these frames once housed
                         pictorial evidence of our victim's
                         rival in love.

               Danyael heads back over to the body, examining his head and
               finding a bloody wound on the back of his scalp.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         This poor fellow was struck down by
                         another man of about the same
                         height and build, given the
                         positioning and depth of this blow.
                         Almost certainly from behind, and
                         with a heavy, blunt instrument.

               Danyael produces a pair of tweezers from his pocket, deftly
               pulling something from the wound and holding it up to his
               magnifying glass.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         A wooden item, perhaps a cricket
                         bat or something similar.

               He stands, hand on his chin in contemplation.

                                   NAOMI
                         So... another man entered the house
                         and killed him? Is that what I
                         heard?

                                   DANYAEL
                         Elementary, my dear girl. You will
                         rarely find a more powerful motive
                         for crime than that of love.

               Danyael crouches by the body again, preparing to turn him
               over.

                                   NAOMI
                         Shouldn't we wait for the police to
                         arrive first?

                                   DANYAEL
                         If I waited for the police in the
                         normal course of my investigations,
                         then I would be forced to learn the
                         art of patience.

               He rolls the body over, the man falling limply spread-eagled
               as his hair falls from his face.

               Naomi GASPS and Danyael also reacts - it's Diego!

               Danyael turns to Naomi, registering the shock in her
               expression.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         Have you seen this man before?

                                   NAOMI
                         Why, yes sir, that's Mr. Diego. I
                         never even realised he was my
                         neighbour! He's always seen about
                         the town with Lady McFadden, the
                         two are quite the celebrity couple
                         round here!

               Danyael reacts at the name 'Lady McFadden,' an awful
               realisation starting to down on him. He stands.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Then it's clear that whoever did
                         this not only knew of our victim,
                         and thus his lady wife, but also
                         the best way to surprise and kill
                         him without leaving barely a scrap
                         of evidence behind. Almost as if...

               Danyael reaches into his pocket for something - and a pair of
               BLOOD-STAINED GLOVES drop out and land on the floor!

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         ... as if it was someone who knew
                         exactly how to commit the perfect
                         murder...

               Danyael looks up and meets Naomi's eyes, Naomi starting to
               back away from him in terror.

                                   NAOMI
                         You... it was you!

                                   DANYAEL
                         Now wait just a minute, this can't
                         possibly be-

                                   NAOMI
                             (shrieks)
                         Help! Police! Murder!

               She turns and flees, barrelling out of the house as fast as
               she can and hollering for help all the way.

               Danyael turns back to the murder scene - the body, the bloody
               gloves and the evidence all starting to point his way.

                                   DANYAEL
                         But... I can't have... why would
                         I... I'd never...

               The shrill sound of POLICE WHISTLES can be heard outside, and
               Danyael realises he's in deep trouble now. He looks back to
               the body desperately.

                                   DANYAEL (cont'd)
                         Come on, Norton, think. How could
                         you have killed this man and not
                         even remembered it? It's simply not
                         logical, unless... unless...

               He hears FOOTSTEPS clattering back up the stairs, and turns
               to the doorway as Naomi returns, this time flanked by several
               POLICEMEN.

                                   NAOMI
                             (points)
                         There! He's the one! That's the one
                         what done it!

                                   POLICEMAN
                         Alright, Mr. Norton, I'm going to
                         have to ask you to accompany us
                         down to the station.

               Danyael looks back to the body, then at the constables, and
               suddenly a look of relief washes over him.

                                   DANYAEL
                         Oh, I get it now...

               The constables approach to cuff him as we PUSH IN on Naomi,
               still staring at Danyael as we MATCH CUT to:

        20     INT. SOUND STAGE - NIGHT                                20

               Naomi's back in her musical garb, her face now wearing a big
               old smile as she's joined by a line of showgirls, high
               kicking their way through another razzle-dazzle routine.

               Facing her is Danyael, SNAPPING his fingers to the beat as a
               line of similarly-tailored guys behind him do the same.

               Syren is now up with the band, scatting to the music and
               leading the band like she was made to do it.

               As the two lines of dancers gradually close in one each
               other, the jazzy music breaks into another big band freak out
               as everyone splits into couples, Danyael and Naomi finding
               each other as couples swirl all around them.

               They're having the time of their lives, everybody whooping
               and cheering as the band rise from their seats, pushing the
               music higher as the whole stage is filled with movement.

               In the midst of it all, we focus in on Danyael and Naomi,
               their high-energy dancing slowing to a gentler, almost tender
               slow step, holding one another tightly.

               The lights all around them start to dim, a single spotlight
               picking them out as the swing music fades out, replaced by a
               soft, crooning violin melody.

                                   NAOMI
                         Danyael?

                                   DANYAEL
                         Yes?

                                   NAOMI
                         Can I ask you something?

                                   DANYAEL
                         Anything, sweetheart. You know
                         that.

                                   NAOMI
                         Good. It's something that's been on
                         my mind for a while, you see, and
                         I... well... oh, shoot.

               She GRABS him and pulls him in for a KISS, the music SWELLING
               around them - this is the big moment, the climax to the show
               as our young lovers get together at last:

               And Naomi suddenly breaks the kiss. She blinks, looking
               around, seemingly bewildered all of a sudden. Everything else
               carries on - the music, the dancing couples, even Danyael's
               goofy grin, but now Naomi realises something's up.

                                   NAOMI (cont'd)
                         What's... what's going on?

               She starts to become more agitated, looking back at Danyael
               for an answer as we cut to:

        21     EXT. FORT - NIGHT                                       21

               Push in on a pile of rubble, SMOKE drifting across the scene.
               FIRES burn all around - the fortress has been razed to the
               ground, and BODIES litter the ruins.

               The rubble suddenly MOVES, as though someone beneath is
               trying to push their way out - and moments later Diego does
               just that, fighting his way free with a cry of exertion.

               Staggering to his feet, he's covered in cuts and wounds, his
               uniform tattered and torn. Scanning the aftermath all around,
               his heart sinks - nothing moves.

               Plenty of Mexican soldiers have fallen, but there isn't a
               single member of Diego's garrison left either.

               He wades through the wreckage, a little shellshocked,
               desperately looking for any sign of life.

                                   DIEGO
                         No... no... this isn't how it was
                         supposed to go...

               He passes the youthful soldier from earlier, a BAYONET
               protruding from his chest.

                                   DIEGO (cont'd)
                         There's no way... no way I should
                         still be here...

               His eyes fall on the sight he feared the most - Lt. McFadden,
               face down on the ground with several Mexican soldiers dead
               around her.

               Diego races forward, stumbling over the debris in his haste
               and skidding to her side in a cloud of dust.

                                   DIEGO (cont'd)
                         Please... no...

               He turns her over - but she's long gone. A thin sliver of
               blood runs from her lips, her skin pale and lifeless. Diego
               cradles her, a TEAR rolling down his cheek.

                                   DIEGO (cont'd)
                         Why? Why you... and not me?

               He suddenly throws his head back and ROARS:

                                   DIEGO (cont'd)
                         Why not me?

               His head drops as he starts to SOB, overcome with emotion at
               last, pulling McFadden's limp body to him as he sinks to the
               floor.

                                   DIEGO (cont'd)
                         This isn't what I wanted... this
                         isn't how it was meant to be...

               Diego's body shudders with sobs for a few moments, until he
               slowly lifts his head:

               And a DOOR stands in the middle of the fortress grounds. It's
               a heavy oak door, standing all alone, and most certainly
               wasn't there a second ago. Diego stares at the door,
               dumbfounded, before we cut back to:
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